no tittle, just some songs i wrote this past year in school when bored

[kjm112385]

I know this is my first post, but it was this section that attracted me to these forums. Now that i've been looking around I think I really like it. So I decided I would post the lyrics I wrote this school year on here to see what people think and recommend. M3ind you, i havnt really revised these and just read them for the first time in over a few months, but i hope they're at least decent, if not just say so.

THis one i wrote after a long ass lecture in Human Geography about global bullshit

Thanks and feel free to hate lol

this cant be right
this injustice we preach
we must fight
to end this hate that we teach

the land of the free
who holds down those lesser
the land of the free
who is truly the oppressor

now open your eyes
our world just aint right
death screams left and right
and we are self absorbed

expose the issues that be
teach the majority
end our societal ignorance
and again prove our moral dominance

this cant be right
this injustice we preach
we must fight
to end this hate that we teach

the land of the free
who holds down those lesser
the land of the free
who is truly the oppressor

This one was wirtten during english after the AP exam, I didnt have much else to do


my sorrow swells, and it expels
through my orifices
my orifices

my pain breeds, and it succeeds
all that was good
all that was good

now everyday i dream of you
everyday i see you gone
and everyday i know i need
your faithlessness

now everyday i feel your pain
and i need your faith
in hating me
destroying me

my sorrow swells, and it expels
through my orifices
my orifices

my pain breeds, and it succeeds
all that was good
all that was good


None of these are titled, and i know the like music behind them may not make much sense but oh well, thanks to anyone who cares and gives any reccomendations. i got more ill up later