Hip Hop Rap (Tell Me If You Like Or Not)

[KeKe-Swagger]

uhhh did i do that
cause i think i did
gatta be fresh to even roll with my click
gatta have stacks to even roll with my click
yea and thats how it is
gatta have dope raps to even be in dis biz


i had a dream
that at some point in my life id be living the dream
u rappers are the students and i am the dean
leave mi money under the mat
if not youll find two bullets in your back
u guys are addicticted to mi raps like crack
but mi neighborhood was good
im even kind of glad i didnt live in the hood
yup cause i dont have 2 be straped
i can walk down the street without having 2 get jacked
mi money is stacked as tall as shaq
dunkin on yall ****** with one hand under mi ball sack
and dont even give me that crap
now stand on ya feet and give me a clap


uhhh did i do that
cause if killin dis song is that den i think i did
gatta be fresh to even roll with my click
gatta have stacks to even roll with my click
yea and thats how it is
gatta have dope raps to even be in dis biz


yall ****** are all tell no show
let me show yall how long mi chain can go
its so long it can probably hit the floor
and i aint talkin bout the chain no mo
im talkin bout mi third leg no homo
haha u can be mi buddy like sherman
women chasin as if im wearin sure|man
after im done wit yall i leave yall squirmen
she dont suck she be slurpin
dis shit is fuckin knarly man im swagg surfin
did i leave u guys with sores
mi moneys like buzz light year cuz its infinte and beyond yours
look at my neck all it does is glow
yall maybe fast but yall lose but im carl cus i winslow


uhhhh did i kill dis shit
yuppp cause i think i did
gatta be fresh to even roll with my click
gatta have stacks to even roll with my click
yea and thats how it is
gatta have dope raps to even be in dis biz
damn i dont even kno wat to say
i thought id be done but im still far away
gatta gurl in my bed man it was okay
looked at her she was not a looker to say


uhhh did i do that
cause i think i did
gatta be fresh to even roll with my click
gatta have stacks to even roll with my click
yea and thats how it is
im change the ending so everybody knows
that i juss murdered dis song case closed

[xJesusFreakx]

No.

[caveBEAR]

Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, oh my god, please tell me that the 'Uhhhh, did I do that' is supposed to be said exactly like Steve Urkel. Sweet baby Jesus, tell me that what I'm hearing in my head is just as funny in real life.



Oh, and yeah, that was great. You'll be in Young Money for sure, standing next to Drake and Tyga.

[Blaise&Panthia.]

I hope you're actually thirteen.

[HometownHero]

The age explains the stupidity. I hope this is a fucking joke. I couldn't even make it all the way through

[chipdip18]

Listen to A Tribe Called Quest when getting your influence for rap, not brokeNCYDE.

[FueledByRock]

This is original, and bound to change the game forever!

[behappy123]

Listen to A Tribe Called Quest when getting your influence for rap, not brokeNCYDE.

Word.

[writeacliche]

I'm going to sugarcoat this for you: That was the worst thing I've ever read.

+points for not rappin' bout dem 6th grade bitches you be all up in.

[behappy123]

:-dI'm going to sugarcoat this for you: That was the worst thing I've ever read.

+points for not rappin' bout dem 6th grade bitches you be all up in.

[Codi23]

Shit, son.

[Jali]

Well it probably doesn't help that i can't hear a beat, but some of those lines didn't seem to fit any kind of rythm. Also, the use of slang was BALLS, that shit is fine if its actually how u talk but that shit was forced, rap how u talk, thats how it works.

Another point: STOP RHYMING WORDS WITH THE SAME WORD! That's just lazy, and I know alot of successful rappers do it but its still annoying!

some of these wouldn't be that hard to fix either:
instead of

gatta be fresh to even roll with my click
gatta have stacks to even roll with my click
yea and thats how it is
gatta have dope raps to even be in dis biz

you could say:

" gatta be fresh to even roll with my click,
n if u don't got the stacks, m8, climb on my dick
n don't be chattin shit cus its just how it is
if ur rhymin dis shit u don't belong in dis biz"

it still sucks but it has more ambitious rhymes and the rhythm isn't quite as fucked.

Don't give up on it though, i have yet to meet a 13 year old who can write decent rhymes.

[cacophonous]

Listen to A Tribe Called Quest when getting your influence for rap, not brokeNCYDE.

This has much more depth lyrically than Brokencyde, to be fair.

[chipdip18]

This has much more depth lyrically than Brokencyde, to be fair.

Hahaha fair enough.

[Matt Chylak]

bad rap is bad
bad rapping is bad
ur lack of spelling makes me mad
your inability to rhyme well makes me sad.
someday you'll understand flow and rhythm a tad
and less kids like me will call your rapping bad
and though you've got a long way to go before your rhymes is rad
i can understand why they're the way they are; you're just a young lad
good luck in the future, but never post something this bad
ever again, unless you're looking for more criticizing stabs..

^better than yours

[Jali]

bad rap is bad
bad rapping is bad
ur lack of spelling makes me mad
your inability to rhyme well makes me sad.
someday you'll understand flow and rhythm a tad
and less kids like me will call your rapping bad
and though you've got a long way to go before your rhymes is rad
i can understand why they're the way they are; you're just a young lad
good luck in the future, but never post something this bad
ever again, unless you're looking for more criticizing stabs..

^better than yours

marginally.

[anthonydarko]

So are you one of those kids who's mommy told him he could do anything because you are gifted according to her?

[Jali]

So are you one of those kids who's mommy told him he could do anything because you are gifted according to her?
So are you one of those completely insecure 21 year old blokes who try and make themselves feel better by making fun of 13 year olds?

[Poe-tryGirl]

No, I don't like it.

[Charles777]

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