Facade

[SLADE775]

Poisoned glory
A state mind beyond insanity
The Stories are always incomplete
Through visions of dignified victory
The truth is hidden beneath
layers of avarice and deceit

Wave to the crowded streetsides
And make sure you smile brightly
like the hero you claim to be
You're a facade
for an entire country

You're rapists
You deserve the same fate you inflicted
Punishment
It comes in the form of sleepless evenings
She'll ask why you're so unfocused
you'll say that it's nothing and no one could understand

Wave to the crowded streetsides
And make sure you smile brightly
Like the hero you claim to be
You're a facade
for an entire country

Stength through dominance
Burn their villages
Burn their heritage
Scorch the land you wish to imprison

Remember the look on her face
She was barely 6 years of age
For one split second you felt her pain
Never enough
Never enough
It's never enough

She fell to the ground
You watched her last breath drain out
Some hero you are now

[Angsty]

bad. really bad. you're not good at this. stop now.

[iHATEapril]

It's pretty cool, If I recall I think you've had better, but it's definitely not bad like the guy above me said. I see some definitely Thursday influence in it, but with a real fresh twist to it. Keep it up.

[SLADE775]

bad. really bad. you're not good at this. stop now.

I will skullfuck you to death.

[iHATEapril]

I will skullfuck you to death.
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[Angsty]

haha! I bet threatening me with violence over the internet makes you feel awesome! keep it up!

[OveriseFan]

haha! I bet threatening me with violence over the internet makes you feel awesome! keep it up!

skullfucking isn't violence.

It's love.

[SLADE775]

haha! I bet threatening me with violence over the internet makes you feel awesome! keep it up!

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[a speedo model]

i really enjoyed it. good job.

[a speedo model]

haha! I bet threatening me with violence over the internet makes you feel awesome! keep it up!

fuck off.

[SLADE775]

i really enjoyed it. good job.

Thanks man.

[fromwithin]

I will skullfuck you to death.

me next?

btw good stuff.

[SLADE775]

me next?

btw good stuff.

Thanks.

No, I love you too much for that, I'll just stick in your anus.

:X

[Checkers]

this is just terrible. a complete and utter mess of words you probably don't understand describing a situation it's unlikely you've ever been in. get over yourself, stop poisening innocent peoples eyes with your pathetic on screen ramblings.

[SLADE775]

this is just terrible. a complete and utter mess of words you probably don't understand describing a situation it's unlikely you've ever been in. get over yourself, stop poisening innocent peoples eyes with your pathetic on screen ramblings.

Ohhh did I hurt your feelings?

I'm glad.

Good thing you erased that thread too.

You ugly bitch.

[Speyside]

this is just terrible. a complete and utter mess of words you probably don't understand describing a situation it's unlikely you've ever been in. get over yourself, stop poisening innocent peoples eyes with your pathetic on screen ramblings.
You like A Change of Pace. Shut.the.fuck.up.

Slade: when I started reading it, I was preparing myself for the typical pseudo-gothy, self-pity that most 13 year old girls write. But I think ultimately, you pulled it together and made a cohesive piece. I'm not sure it works standing alone as poetry, but it could definitely work as lyrics. Not bad at all.

[adelphi_rocks]

It's pretty cool, If I recall I think you've had better, but it's definitely not bad like the guy above me said. I see some definitely Thursday influence in it, but with a real fresh twist to it. Keep it up.
i was trying to think of what it reminded me of, and it was thursday. i liked it.

[ArTkY_]

Oh.My.God.

Very Thursday influenced, and I love it. Slade, you know I've never really cared for your work, but this... this is very good. Its more than very good, its great. Good job. I usually think you get a bit too wordy, and there are patches here and there where it is, but overall, in this song, your vocabulary was used to its full potential.

Again, good job.

[lfdfforever]

skullfucking isn't violence.

It's love. Then I guess I gave your mom some love last night.

[SLADE775]

Oh.My.God.

Very Thursday influenced, and I love it. Slade, you know I've never really cared for your work, but this... this is very good. Its more than very good, its great. Good job. I usually think you get a bit too wordy, and there are patches here and there where it is, but overall, in this song, your vocabulary was used to its full potential.

Again, good job.

80% of everything I write is influenced by Thursday.

And thanks a lot.

[GoWaitInTheCar]

skullfucking isn't violence.

It's love.

At least that's what I was taught. :huh: