Dead Romeos Alive Juliets (First Song On Here)

[ToxicHeart]

First song on here x3 so comments appreciated xD and i can't spell so if theirs mis spelling.... please.. i know their must be in their somewhere so no talky abouty x3 but enjoy :)



He said I'm sorry I couldn't live for you
And I'm sorry to make you cry I love you
I don't want you to bleed over me
Be a good girl, and dream pleasant dreams for me

She said its ok, no more suffering
Crying is to show you that I love you too
Always will
I won't bleed over you
I'll try to be and I'll try to dream

And then he went
He was just, a small beautiful dream that showed up in this ugly hell
Now, he's gone
There was nothing she could do
She was helpless, useless to the eye
Now, he's gone
There was so much she wanted to tell him
But he's gone

He said I'm sorry I couldn't live for you
She said its ok, no more suffering
He said I'm sorry to make you cry
She said crying is to show you that I love you too
Dead Romeos and alive Juliet’s isn’t what’s suppose to happen


He said she said they both loved each other
Till the end
His end is close but hers is too far see

He said I'm sorry I couldn't live for you
She said its ok, no more suffering
He said I'm sorry to make you cry
She said crying is to show you that I love you too
Dead Romeos and alive Juliet’s isn’t what’s suppose to happen

Warm tears streaming from her
Hurting from the inside out
Sad eyes watching at night
Tears never ending hair caught on her face
Wet from the nonstop tears
Falling and

He said I'm sorry I couldn't live for you
She said its ok, no more suffering
He said I'm sorry to make you cry
She said crying is to show you that I love you too
Dead Romeos and alive Juliet’s isn’t what’s suppose to happen

[DickfaceChillah]

Was this on Sing the Sorrow?

[MinionOfBoredom]

There's a bonus track on Decemberunderground called "On the Arrow."

He said, "What truly belongs here?"
"Not I," she said.
"I’ll lie here with you."
He knows no one shines forever,
they change with the weather.
He said, "I've now stayed too long here."
"Goodbye," she said. "I’ll wait here for you."
He knows the winds carry sorrow;
as they leave she'll follow; they leave tomorrow.

Fragments of joy torn apart:
A freshly drained heart that beats
disguise themselves through him.
He’ll say that it’s nothing new,
and swear this is true:
"For you, I’ll swallow the ocean."

I'll swallow the ocean...

He said, "Who truly belongs here?"
"Not I," she said.
"I'll lie here to you.
I know this sorrow is sacred and I’ll never break you.
I’ll softly save you."

Fragments of joy torn apart:
A freshly drained heart that beats
disguise themselves through him.
He’ll say that it’s nothing new,
and swear this is true:
"For you, I’ll swallow the ocean."

I'll swallow the ocean...

@OP:

It seems like you took the general cadence and "he said...she said" theme from this song, which is fine, but the way you do it has a very "been there, done that" kind of feel.

There are no particularly provocative images, a number of cliches, and awkward lines in these lyrics, the most notable of the last mentioned being

Dead Romeos and alive Juliet's isn’t what’s supposed to happen
"Isn't" should be "aren't" (the phrase "Romeos and Juliets" is plural"), and the whole "what's supposed to happen" part is clunky.

[ToxicHeart]

tbph honest.. i had no idea about that song lol i just wrote this lol but thx for the comments :)