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InDireNeedSF
04/15/06, 10:49 PM
I tried taking some advice from people from the last time I posted something on here, so hopefully this turns out better... again ANY comments are welcome negative/positive and I would love constructive critism if you have any

This song is about this kid who just thinks he's better then everyone else I've been toying with 2 names for it which are below and 2 titles that I'm not going with are "If People Got Money For Beings Dicks To Their 'Friends" You'd Be Real Fucking Rich" and the other along those lines "If People Got Money For Thinking They're More Superior and Better Than Everyone In The World You'd Be Real Fucking Rich"

But here r the 2 names I'm deciding between "If This Is What You Want, Then This Is What You'll Get" or "It's Called A Chain Reaction"

And here is the song...


I take every word you say
With a grain of salt
Your integrity is wearing
My dignity is showing
I'm growing tired of
These fucking games you play
Keep hidden shielded away

With these words on my tongue
I'll spite you
The only way I know how to
The war of words are on
I hope you're ready
Ready (Ready or not)
Cause without you there'd be no need for
You're hopeless I hope you expect more
Of this bitterness from this common sense
That's been fueling for so long

(Chorus)
I'll undress these words
So you can't spin them
Into webs and trap me once again, inside
Forever yours
I'll forever cut you down

These shoes are the perfect size
To fit inside your mouth
Until you learn, until you learn
That your words are worthless
As worthless as a fucking
Shovel on cement
To get inside your head

(Chorus)

If my words could kill
You'd be already dead
If my words could kill you'd be already
If my words could kill
You'd be forever
Down on the ground
And I'd watch you suffer
Rolling around yea I'll watch you suffer
When there is nowhere left to go

I'll undress these words
So you can't spin them
Into webs and trap me once again
I'll undress these words
I'll undress these
Into webs, I'll trap you once again

(Chorus)

You keep throwing them up
I'll keep shooting them down
Keep throwing them up
I'll shoot them down
I'll play your games
I'll play your games

Throw them up...
Shoot them down...

I guess I'll play your game
I guess I'll play your game
The war of words is on
I hope you're ready...

OveriseFan
04/16/06, 12:03 PM
You re-use your ideas too much.

On first glance.

A picasso blue
04/16/06, 05:36 PM
get rid of the cliches