Mixed Minds (What If I Told?) Second Post :)

[ToxicHeart]

hiii i took what people told me and thought this would be a better song to put on here since i do not know any other songs that have the same lyrics (pleeease dead GOD let their be no songs with these lyrics) kk enjoy :) o btw anything written in -'s are screamed such as -begged for me- kk enjoooy :)



So I’ve done it
I’ve done it finally
Blown it all in this strange secrecy
Let’s be honest here
I know stuff you wouldn’t want me to share
I know stuff that would make him scared

I’m sorry for what I’ve done but my trap you’ve sprung
And you’ve hurt me bad and you’ve gotta pay
Cause you’re the one that begged me to stay
I’m sorry for it sorry for it

But you gotta
Mixed up mind
You gotta mixed up lifeline
You begged for me to stay
Now you say to go away x2

So breaking away from the unwanted

What if I told

Yes you know I’m singing about you
So tell me after
What if I told about you?
Do you think they would believe me?
What if I kept my mouth shut?

I’m pretty sure you’d still hate me
I’m pretty sure you’d never wanna see me
But let’s get back to point

You gotta
Mixed up mind
You gotta mixed up lifeline
You begged for me to stay
Now you say to go away x2

-You- begged for -begged for me-


Mixed up mind
Mixed up lifeline
Im sure i didn’t tell

But its going to hell

Your secrets out...
Their coming for you...
He’s scared of you...

-Your secrets out-

Mixed up mind
You gotta mixed up lifeline
You begged for me to stay
Now you say to go away x2

[ToxicHeart]

DOn't forget to comment... if ya wanna guys xD and gals :o

[flabbergasted]

I liked the idea behind this song, and trust me, I know where you're coming from (if this song was written through experience, at least), but it was a little scattered here and there, and the rhyme scheme was a little off (that is assuming that it was supposed to be a sung lyric). Keep writing, though. I assure you it gets better and better! :)