a good bye of sorts

[comic geek]

a good bye of sorts


to all of those who never knew me and those who hurt me still
i hope that this may shock your soul and send your heart a chill
my name is still a mystery though each and every day
you stripped me of my dignity and took my life away
i never did look forward i counted down my days
you made me fear the future in so many different ways
i lay in bed afraid each night but never cos of dark
i wished away the lightened day the time you left your mark
i hope you find your love inside i hope i never fade
that i pervade your every day remind you how you made
the short few years of one boys life a daily slow decline
i hope your lives are fruitful and not a waste like mine
i hope one day you'll grow up and face what you have done
until that day i admit in my death you've won




erm im new to this but comments would be appreciated

[Checkers]

wow that was good. i like it very much. i would not change a single thing about it. i can relate to it as well. just, good work buddy :D

[comic geek]

thankyou

[apoemtothedead]

My Brutal Time-Reading-That-Piece-of-Shit

[comic geek]

hey what ever at least u read it

[apoemtothedead]

hey what ever at least u read it
nope. I didn't.