been absent for awhile..

[Blared]

I took a ride and I fell asleep
My eyes opened wide with such relief
I have arrived in somewhere new
I’m pushing fate aside
Just for you

verse
So if you get immersed
In waters just too high
Just know that others have
Had it so much worse
The days have said goodbye
Breathe easy, say hello
Tonight is one last try
Let’s go (go…go…go)

chorus
So hello girl, did you catch the waves
So hello girl, did you catch your flight
Close the drapes and fly into the night
So hello girl, did you catch the waves
So hello girl, did you catch your flight
Close the drapes and fly into the night

Verse
I am assured you live without the sun
It rises and you sigh
I came along just to remind
That your word is not the only one
You have survived
Breathe easy, say hello
Tonight was one last try
Let’s go (go…go…go)

chorus
So hello girl, did you catch the waves
So hello girl, did you catch your flight
Close the drapes and fly into the night
So hello girl, did you catch the waves
So hello girl, did you catch your flight
Close the drapes and fly into the night

It probably feels short cause I'm still working on the outro. Musically, this is the first song I plan to work on, but before I start I'd really like to know if it's good enough or not. I'll soon show this to my band after I demo the guitar and vocals that I have to do. Thanks for any comments/suggestions.

[a speedo model]

i like it alot. you haven't posted in here in a while, it's good to have you back. always really enjoyed you're stuff. keep it up.

[Blared]

Thanks. :)

[cris545]

sounds catchy, it's a bit clichéd at a few parts but it's good.

:thumbsup:

[apoemtothedead]

Go back to being absent.

[Blared]

Go back to being absent.
You're in a good mood today.