whenfirefalls
04/22/06, 03:00 PM
All right, so I'm kind of a regular on the forums, but I'm too much of a wuss to use my normal name on here. I know it's not very good, or very long, but I'd appreciate some feedback. Thanks!
You're the ghost that's in my mind
You follow me into sleep
Next to my bed you lie when I awake
You'll follow me forever,
As a reminder, a mistake.
Your shadow lingers over my head
And haunts me along my path
With so much unexplained
So many broken dreams,
And regret you can't conceive.
Your figure is burned onto my eyes
and I can't forget your smile,
I thought you were forgettable,
But the heart cannot deny,
True love lost in time.
"Come back," she said.
"Please make this sorrow pass,
I don't know what I've done."
My dear, my love,
It's only just begun.
You're the ghost that's in my mind
You follow me into sleep
Next to my bed you lie when I awake
You'll follow me forever,
As a reminder, a mistake.
Your shadow lingers over my head
And haunts me along my path
With so much unexplained
So many broken dreams,
And regret you can't conceive.
Your figure is burned onto my eyes
and I can't forget your smile,
I thought you were forgettable,
But the heart cannot deny,
True love lost in time.
"Come back," she said.
"Please make this sorrow pass,
I don't know what I've done."
My dear, my love,
It's only just begun.