Past Midnight

[dashboard1190]

It's past midnight
The rain falls silently
My footsteps feel heavy against the road
The smell of springtime fills my nostrils

It's past midnight
Shoelaces untied, careless
The street is dark
I'm running blind

It's past midnight
The sky is cloudy
Everyone asleep
Except for me.

Thanks for reading.

[apoemtothedead]

Thanks for sucking.

[dashboard1190]

Thanks for sucking.

Didn't like it?

[apoemtothedead]

Didn't like it?
Didn't read it.

[TKTrish]

You shouldn't have a right to comment on someone's work when you don't even read it.

As for my comment, I thought it was okay. Not that great but with some practice you could improve greatly.

[apoemtothedead]

You shouldn't have a right to comment on someone's work when you don't even read it.

As for my comment, I thought it was okay. Not that great but with some practice you could improve greatly.
You should have the right to shut up.

[lfdfforever]

Thanks for sucking. Your're one mean Jew.

[dashboard1190]

You shouldn't have a right to comment on someone's work when you don't even read it.

As for my comment, I thought it was okay. Not that great but with some practice you could improve greatly.

I just wrote it after running home in the rain last night.

It isn't meant to be amazing or anything, but I just wrote what came to me.

[a speedo model]

it's okay but nothing really special. with some work, it could be something.