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ImpulZe
04/24/06, 01:46 PM
This calls for a seperation
A new life of anticipation
Were both ready to leave
I'm stuck on my knees
with my face to the floor


This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along

There was a pub
I was depressed
I took a chance
I got undresses
I might regret
I might repay
A life of happiness
Is just moments away



This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along


You made the Reason
I could let go
You buried your self
So slow
You Made the Reason
There cut and Dry
So I slam the door and
yelled Goodbye...for the last time

Can we live a life Without us
Can we sing a song without us
Is there punishment without us
All a life we cared, theres no more us.


This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along

a speedo model
04/24/06, 02:17 PM
it's okay, i don't know. nothing really special. but keep working on it. you can probably make into something good. we'll see.

Greg
05/04/06, 09:27 PM
awful... but in all seriousness....

it would make more sense if it was all in the same tense....

here is the best example of it not being so "Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along"

you use present and past tense.... i dunno. it's not needed. but i think it makes sense if it all goes together correctly.

ImpulZe
05/05/06, 08:47 AM
edit forget it.