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ImpulZe
05/01/06, 07:10 AM
Divorce Party



This calls for a seperation
A new life of anticipation
Were both ready to leave
I'm stuck on my knees
with my face to the floor


This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along

There was a pub
I was depressed
I took a chance
I got undresses
I might regret
I might repay
A life of happiness
Is just moments away


This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along


You made the Reason
I could let go
You buried your self
So slow
You Made the Reason
There cut and Dry
So I slam the door and
yelled Goodbye...for the last time

Can we live a life Without us
Can we sing a song without us
Is there punishment without us
All a life we cared, theres no more us.


This is the Party of the Century
It's Called a Divorce Party, and its Made for three
Theres The Ex, The New Lover, and of Course theres Me
Now I'm stuck in the Middle and all I wanted to do was Sing Along
OveriseFan
05/01/06, 01:58 PM
Um...

definately not finished.
iHATEapril
05/01/06, 02:26 PM
Needs work, the ideas are incomplete and it's a bit too straightforward.
ArTkY_
05/01/06, 03:35 PM
Dude. You are so on the verge of being an excellent writer, your ideas are just always incomplete and you are too blunt.
iHATEapril
05/01/06, 03:50 PM
Dude. You are so on the verge of being an excellent writer, your ideas are just always incomplete and you are too blunt.

Dude we said the same thing, like exactly.
ArTkY_
05/01/06, 04:38 PM
Dude we said the same thing, like exactly.
That's a sign we should date. I didn't read your comment, lol.
iHATEapril
05/01/06, 04:58 PM
That's a sign we should date. I didn't read your comment, lol.

I've been waiting for that sign.
OveriseFan
05/01/06, 05:07 PM
***s
OveriseFan
05/01/06, 05:07 PM
P.S. I'll help you out with this after I get back from dinner.
ArTkY_
05/01/06, 05:08 PM
I've been waiting for that sign.
Same.
iHATEapril
05/01/06, 05:20 PM
***s

hahahahaa
parallelism
05/01/06, 09:49 PM
Agreed with ^.
You could make this great, it just needs quite a bit of work.
a speedo model
05/02/06, 08:19 PM
they pretty much said it...
ImpulZe
05/03/06, 10:26 AM
yeah I know my first to chorus are good but then my ideas go blank.