Constructive Criticism Welcome.

[anon_poems]

First post under this name. I'll just post a collection. I'll add more as i go.


I fucking hate how unfamiliar we are. We are supposed to be close knit.

Didn’t you know that?

situations become spoiled when you leave them be, or Ignore them like they weren't.


What would be normal just can't seem right.

Comfortless throughout the day and drunk throughout the night

No matter how restless I am or how much I want things to change

I am not everyone else.


What the fuck is wrong with me, or us? One’s right (me). One left (me), and one stayed (you).

Average conversation doesn’t seem to be an option

So by process of elimination I’m left to sit quietly and hope for nice words to come.

They never do.



Bottles to the wall, fists to the jaw. There is no mess to clean up.



CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM IS WELCOME AND ENCOURAGED.
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IS GOOD/BAD

[anon_poems]

Ha, yea you were right.
You're the air in my veins, the water in my lungs and the taste upon my tongue.
but that doesn't keep me awake at night, It’s someone else.
you are not a ghost, but I’ll encourage you to try.
it's hard to be alive when it’s the dream you want to be.



-07/08

[anon_poems]

you know, i wouldnt even recognize myself
if it weren't for this goddamn bookshelf.
i cant believe the time i wasted waiting to grow up
i cant help but think, This is who i am.

Did i do this right? i forget more people than i meet
I used to ride to the park and walk around town
but the storm came, and swept me away

you know, i never meant anything by not meaning anything.
you know i cant admit that im scared.
you know who i was, forget who i am.


11/20/07

[anon_poems]

These tales i tell. Tall as mountains yet shallow as puddles, and as true as love. so call me a liar. just don't say good bye because you know youll miss me more.


-Random older thought.