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FallOutBoyPunch
09/22/09, 09:47 AM
With a love as old as the
Magna Carta but
more important, we should be
careening, not castrating--we should be coasting carefree.
But the watery walls are swallowing
us whole instead of licking the sides of the hull. In one long slurp, slathering us with salty saliva,
we feel
alive. But only for a
second.
I take a breath--deep--inhaling the crests of waves littered with
starfish and seagull shit.
I taste an iceberg on the horizon--one rooted in the murky sands of the Atlantic, but born of the
Pacific; creating a whirlwind of epic proportions. There's always something earthy and natural;
erratic and violent about the
future.
So we crash like waves, and split like country cliff-sides in an effortless earthquake. I'm
thunder,
but you're lightning--I only hope we're
seconds
apart.

FallOutBoyPunch
09/23/09, 04:26 PM
Any criticism would help. Thank you! Sorry for the bump.

FallOutBoyPunch
10/02/09, 06:58 PM
Advice? Anyone? Please?

lfdfforever
10/02/09, 11:53 PM
I enjoyed this because of your obscure wording. Great Job.

Dymytry Vance
10/06/09, 08:19 PM
I enjoyed the filthiness of the lyrics, however I'm left wondering if lightening is a pun or a spelling mistake.
Read my "This Is The Price of Greatness and This Is The Power Of Nonsense"

FallOutBoyPunch
10/09/09, 03:27 PM
I enjoyed the filthiness of the lyrics, however I'm left wondering if lightening is a pun or a spelling mistake.
Read my "This Is The Price of Greatness and This Is The Power Of Nonsense"

I accidentally typed the e instead of i.

Dymytry Vance
10/09/09, 05:32 PM
I accidentally typed the e instead of i.
Well you're welcome for the fix, and it kind of makes sense either way.

eliselovesmusic
10/09/09, 05:52 PM
attn FallOutBoyPunch:

does your name ensue that you like or hate FOB? just wondering.

FallOutBoyPunch
10/09/09, 06:06 PM
attn FallOutBoyPunch:

does your name ensue that you like or hate FOB? just wondering.

In short, yes.

But bear in mind that I created this account and name in 2003. It's now 2009. Many things happened in between.

FallOutBoyPunch
10/10/09, 02:30 PM
attn FallOutBoyPunch:

does your name ensue that you like or hate FOB? just wondering.

But, now that I think about it, why would it ever mean I hated FOB? The Punch? That really wouldn't make sense.
At any rate, the Punch is for Punchline.

eliselovesmusic
10/10/09, 09:10 PM
But, now that I think about it, why would it ever mean I hated FOB? The Punch? That really wouldn't make sense.
At any rate, the Punch is for Punchline.


ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i see.