No One Will Ever Request My Presence At Their Party

[iHATEapril]

It's not exactly up to snuff with some of the things I wrote, but it's okay and I think some people will be able to relate. Let me know. It took me about 20 minutes to write just now.

Despite this faint look of disgust
I’m totally fueled by these feelings of lust
That you believe are completely natural
And despite all of my morals just
take off my clothes, destroy my trust
In this moment, we can’t even be called people

Is this the situation you wished for all along?
Our bodies entangled just feels so wrong
Is this the situation you wished for all along?
To be torn apart by the words in a song

Are we the people you always dreamed we’d be?
We push love aside and give in to our bodies
Are you wishing and hoping I’ll give it all up?
I’m misunderstanding what you think is love

In giving into your ways I forget who I am
I wander the roads with no knowledge of land
When I find the place that she calls home
It’s weathered by time and the horrors it’s known
And the clocks are all set
So they never hit twelve
The day I was changed
The house preserves oh so well

How they say this boy became a man
When he’s not even a person
From the things he withstands
How they say he grew up oh so fast
You have no choice but to change
When love and sex are the same

[matt_rawlings]

"In giving into your ways I forget who I am
I wander the roads with no knowledge of land
When I find the place that she calls home
It’s weathered by time and the horrors it’s known
And the clocks are all set
So they never hit twelve"

That part is money

[iHATEapril]

"In giving into your ways I forget who I am
I wander the roads with no knowledge of land
When I find the place that she calls home
It’s weathered by time and the horrors it’s known
And the clocks are all set
So they never hit twelve"

That part is money

Thanks sweetie. : )

[matt_rawlings]

Thanks sweetie. : )

Your welcome. The whole 'And all the clocks are set so they never hit twelve' made me think of 'Jet Black New Year' by thursday

[iHATEapril]

Your welcome. The whole 'And all the clocks are set so they never hit twelve' made me think of 'Jet Black New Year' by thursday

I thought there were going to be comparisons to Understanding in a car crash pulled haha.

[a speedo model]

i like it. it's really good for the amount of time you wrote it in, there are alot of really good lines, especially the "and the clocks are all set, so they never hit twelve" - some great stuff, man. keep it up.

[to kill this]

you're right, you wouldn't be invited.

[ArTkY_]

When love and sex are the same

You always have the best closing lines! I envy you. This is not as good as some of your best stuff, but its up there. Good work, you're very consistent.

[OveriseFan]

You have become a great writer.

Possibly (forgive the lack of modesty here) better than myself.

[iHATEapril]

You have become a great writer.

Possibly (forgive the lack of modesty here) better than myself.

Thank you guys so much.

[OveriseFan]

Meh, you should've said "I know", but I'll take the thanks I guess...

[ArTkY_]

Meh, you should've said "I know", but I'll take the thanks I guess...
Hello James.

[OveriseFan]

Hey Tariq, I'm writing the most cliche song ever, but I like it a lot.

[ArTkY_]

Hey Tariq, I'm writing the most cliche song ever, but I like it a lot.
Eh, cliches can be used effectively. All that matters is that you like it anyways.

[HazeLitRise]

not only do i love the name of this, but i love your username, i also hate april

[unwritten]

How they say he grew up oh so fast You have no choice but to change When love and sex are the same


So true sometimes.