Dear May..Burn your Guilt

[ImpulZe]

Dear May... Burn your Guilt


The Recognition ceremony soon starts
Night of the Wedding, where the groom steals her heart
When she says I do, the body will melt
Never explain the feelings her body felt

When you say I do
When I say Object
I can feel the Cold fear
Running down you neck
When I walk away
And you grab my Dress
Tonight I feel Like
Were going to make a Mess

Fathers and Sisters we are gathered here today
to celebrate the joining of Steven and dear May
Til death do us Part, in sickness and in health
I see the blood Dripping down your wedding dress.

When you say I do
When I say Object
I can feel the Cold fear
Running down you neck
When I walk away
And you grab my Dress
Tonight I feel Like
Were going to make a Mess

Til' Death do us Part, In sickness and in Health
Beat you so bloody, beat you to death
Til' Death do us Part, In sickness and in Health
Burn up your body, Spread your ashes with my guilt

Til' Death do us Part
Til' Death do us Part
Til' Death do us Part
Til' Death do us Part...

[iHATEapril]

I say shotgun, you say wedding.

No, just kidding, but I think it's weak honestly. Some parts are predictable and I really cannot get into the theme of it. Also, blood being mentioned multiple times really throws me off in an artistic work.

[ImpulZe]

I say shotgun, you say wedding.

lol favorite line from any P!ATD song..seriously..

Thanks for your opinon I don't write these to be praised I write them to see how to improve.

[iHATEapril]

lol favorite line from any P!ATD song..seriously..

Thanks for your opinon I don't write these to be praised I write them to see how to improve.

Good Attitude Man.

[a speedo model]

hmm...i don't know, it's not one of your best. it's not terrible but it's not great either.

[ImpulZe]

average is fine by me

[ArTkY_]

This is decent. You're getting there! You just lack consitency.