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ArTkY_
05/06/06, 02:05 PM
Two months late, hahaha. Worse than February for sure. But not much happened in March, so I guess that can be excused. Honest opinions.

This is anything but routine
Who are you and where did we meet?
You say "I'm a keeper, honey."
We've gone over this more than
possible, I won't come back unless
its to watch you burn in hell

Who are you to say that
running backwards is a crime
You're the biggest hypocrite
I've ever met
Unfortunate,
it seems you have no sense of humor

What? I didn't quite catch that
I know you think that
fighting is pointless
but I feel the only way to
settle our differences
is to leave your bloody mass on the floor

Who are you to say that
running backwards is a crime
You're the biggest hypocrite
I've ever met
Unfortunate,
it seems you have no sense of humor

I know what you wish you knew
I've got what you wish you had
I am what you wish you were

I am
I am
I am

I know what you wish you knew
I've got what you wish you had
I am what you wish you were

I am
I am
I am
All that you're not

Fin.

matt_rawlings
05/06/06, 02:11 PM
I especially like the first verse and the chorus

ArTkY_
05/06/06, 02:12 PM
I especially like the first verse and the chorus
Thank you sir. Those are the only parts I like.

iHATEapril
05/06/06, 03:35 PM
I don't like it near as much as February, definitely the weaker, I'm goign to check out April now. The rhyme scheme in this one is a bit inconsistent and will probably trip over itself at times.

a speedo model
05/07/06, 08:12 PM
not bad. not as good as february but it's still good.

ArTkY_
05/08/06, 03:44 PM
not bad. not as good as february but it's still good.
I don't think I'll be able to top February in this album. Maybe with December, but I don't know.