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a speedo model
05/08/06, 07:32 AM
i wrote this one this morning when i woke up. anyway, wanted to know what you guys think.


“Passing Headlights”
So do we have the right to name this town after ourselves?
A single cigarette’s red glow, is the only light inside
And outside the lamps hang like traitors, deserving to die
So we speed up as the car starts to shake
(One sharp turn could end this)
But we’ve heard rumors of escape

So we spread the glass across the pavement
Like diamonds on black velvet
And sympathies can warm us to sleep
But I will be kept awake
By the headlights passing in the street

One by one, by one thousand they pass

[Chorus]
Look through the trees
To an empty discarded street
Where I paced my thoughts out
And then left them dangling over the bridge to drown
The sidewalk led nowhere

The windshield blades cut through rain
as the wind pushed us closer to the curb
I’ll let the breeze blow me away from the empty words
Keeping me from sleep
And as the headlights approached
I knew it was time to step out into the street

One by one, by one thousand they pass

[Repeat chorus]
Close our eyes as we let the memory forget itself

I see love mirrored in a setting sun
Your hands wrapping around mine
We come undone
I see love mirrored in a setting sun (I saw the cliff approaching)
Your hands wrapping around mine (I saw the cliff approaching)
Let me come undone (but I kept silent…)

[Repeat chorus]
One by one, by one more time
(I swear, I saw this coming all along)

lfdfforever
05/08/06, 12:02 PM
very very very very great

a speedo model
05/08/06, 05:15 PM
very very very very great

thank you very much, man.

ArTkY_
05/08/06, 06:17 PM
Good man. Up to par with your usual stuff. :)
i wrote this one this morning when i woke up. anyway, wanted to know what you guys think.
Don't you love when you get the random urge for a song and it just works?

matt_rawlings
05/08/06, 06:24 PM
That was just seriously fucking wow dude, the imagery was wonderful. Great job

a speedo model
05/08/06, 07:28 PM
Good man. Up to par with your usual stuff. :)

Don't you love when you get the random urge for a song and it just works?

thank you. yeah, it feels pretty great when something random just falls together so effortlessly.

a speedo model
05/08/06, 07:30 PM
That was just seriously fucking wow dude, the imagery was wonderful. Great job

why thank you.:)

eleven-eleven
05/08/06, 09:02 PM
what a way to wake up.

<3

a speedo model
05/09/06, 07:20 AM
what a way to wake up.

<3

thank you.

wyverna
05/09/06, 08:40 AM
awesome as usual

a speedo model
05/09/06, 03:08 PM
awesome as usual

many thanks.

a speedo model
05/11/06, 11:02 AM
bump............................... .....that's right...........i said bump.

SardonicOwnsMe
05/14/06, 02:22 PM
I love this very much.

So we spread the glass across the pavement
Like diamonds on black velvet
This is the greatest, bittersweet beautiful image. I love it.

One by one, by one thousand they pass
I love how this line segways to the chorus. It's a great way to tie everything together.

I’ll let the breeze blow me away from the empty words
Keeping me from sleep
And as the headlights approached
I knew it was time to step out into the street
This seems a little awkward to me, but with music, it probably works.


Great job. Seriously, this is amazing.

a speedo model
05/15/06, 06:44 AM
I love this very much.

So we spread the glass across the pavement
Like diamonds on black velvet
This is the greatest, bittersweet beautiful image. I love it.

One by one, by one thousand they pass
I love how this line segways to the chorus. It's a great way to tie everything together.

I’ll let the breeze blow me away from the empty words
Keeping me from sleep
And as the headlights approached
I knew it was time to step out into the street
This seems a little awkward to me, but with music, it probably works.


Great job. Seriously, this is amazing.

thank you very much. i'm very glad you enjoyed it.

iTookBackSunday
05/15/06, 07:32 PM
man that was really good. i enjoyed it. now go and record it so we can all hear it.

parallelism
05/15/06, 10:55 PM
I like it and I'm very curious to hear what it sounds like.

a speedo model
05/16/06, 07:09 PM
man that was really good. i enjoyed it. now go and record it so we can all hear it.

thank you. i'm planning on recording it as soon as i a) finish the music b) find some good recording equipment. when i do, hopefully in the next few months, i'll be sure to post it.

a speedo model
05/16/06, 07:11 PM
I like it and I'm very curious to hear what it sounds like.

thank you. :)