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ArTkY_
05/15/06, 06:38 AM
This is just some random song I wrote. Its pretty entertaining and catchy, as was its purpose. The lyrics are kinda FOB style (good thing) and I threw in some "emo" crap, but whatever.

"Look in my reflection,"
she said
"I don't see you there"
Way to tear my heart out
and stick it on a stake
God damn! (God damn!)
I can't seem to find
the excuses I've been expectin'
Oh, God (Oh, God!)
Oh, God, I'm on fire

I've been sacrficed on this
on this stone altar, these
Aztec ruins were made for draining blood
You call out to your spirits
As I bleed in your place

Flip my insides out
(I'm outside in!)
I'd rock the boat if I just had the means
I've got the ends but...
(no arms to rock it with)
I looked in your reflection
and I don't see me there
but I'll be damned if I care
Oh, God (Oh, God!)
Oh, God, I'm on fire

Oh, God (Oh, God!)
it burns
(Now I know how they all felt)

Pain beyond pain, eating it all up
lands me in something 70 times hotter
than the center of the earth

Oh, God (Oh, God!)
it burns

I've been sacrficed on this
on this stone altar, these
Aztec ruins were made for draining blood
You call out to your spirits
As I bleed in your place

Oh, look at her make you panic with her moves
Oh...
She's oh-soooo sexual...

Fin.
a speedo model
05/15/06, 06:50 AM
hmm......
TheHeretic
05/15/06, 08:31 AM
same here...I've read a lot of your stuff and this isn't as good...sorry
wyverna
05/15/06, 08:59 AM
It all seems a little... blah. None of it really sticks out to me. I think you can do better.
punkpixie
05/15/06, 09:08 AM
It didn't remind me of FOB at all but I did get a rhythm in my head whilst reading it. I think you know its not as good as your other stuff though.
OveriseFan
05/15/06, 11:47 AM
Haha, I actually dug this.

But maybe it's because I sang/screamed it as appropriate...
ArTkY_
05/15/06, 02:29 PM
I wrote this as filler for my album that will be recorded soon. I wanted at least 11 tracks.
OveriseFan
05/15/06, 02:50 PM
I wrote this as filler for my album that will be recorded soon. I wanted at least 11 tracks.

Liar.
ArTkY_
05/15/06, 04:18 PM
Liar.
You're right, I'll have it recorded in the next two years. I need to find a studio in Houston bad...