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parallelism
05/15/06, 10:59 PM
Sleepwalk


So march in circles; go picketing. We've all prayed for the same sad fate; the short, sweet-faced one that nobody ever forgets. It's a quick and easy birth, a proper life and the same damned place to die.

We beg for the Hand to come down from the sky; a large fist from the blue to compliment the Sun. When it opens up, we'll walk right on. Fingernails and all, we'll live off the Land; excavate the Dirt and the Grit. Somebody once told me it's possible to live forever; to lie down between fingerprints, nurturing our homes as they nurture our souls.

But is it possible to trust?

It once crushed us into dirt; nobody survived. The Hand turned over, our rooftops caved in. Our books became hats for tired summertime scalps. Insomnia set in; the Living Dead walked our streets, and they were us.

We trekked on and on, following the crescent moon as it outlined our Horizon. We just kept walking until finally, we fell asleep. Now we've called it Lost and we've called it Forgotten, but it seems to me that we're still drinking it up; chasing it down with rusty needles and dull knives. Our haunted streets are just horizontal lines, plagued by faulty hope and faulty design.

We're still asleep.
And every line that we walk is just another excuse that we try.

TheHeretic
05/16/06, 12:12 AM
very good, very good...again...and as I was expecting! I'm missing the latin though ....no jk haha

ben pequeno
05/16/06, 12:18 AM
you should really start posting in your ap journal and not the forum.

parallelism
05/16/06, 11:15 AM
very good, very good...again...and as I was expecting! I'm missing the latin though ....no jk haha

Thank you very much, haha; you're right, no Latin here.

parallelism
05/16/06, 11:15 AM
you should really start posting in your ap journal and not the forum.

Hmm, what do you mean?

punkpixie
05/16/06, 01:47 PM
I think your style is awesome. And what's more is you do it with great flair.

parallelism
05/16/06, 01:53 PM
I think your style is awesome. And what's more is you do it with great flair.

Thank you very much, I like your work a lot also.

punkpixie
05/16/06, 02:00 PM
PS. I love love love the last line. I just read it again.

a speedo model
05/16/06, 07:22 PM
very good. the last line is awesome. good job, man.

parallelism
05/17/06, 11:06 AM
very good. the last line is awesome. good job, man.

Thank you very much.

ArTkY_
05/17/06, 03:09 PM
We're still asleep.
And every line that we walk is just another excuse that we try.

Excellent, excellent, excellent. Very good job.

iHATEapril
05/17/06, 03:14 PM
Great, great job.

parallelism
05/17/06, 04:23 PM
We're still asleep.
And every line that we walk is just another excuse that we try.

Excellent, excellent, excellent. Very good job.

Thank you, thank you, thank you. Very many thanks.

Great, great job.

Thank you for reading it.

ArTkY_
05/17/06, 04:30 PM
Thank you, thank you, thank you. Very many thanks.
Way to copy my post, cheater.

parallelism
05/17/06, 05:44 PM
Way to copy my post, cheater.

Haha, my bad.

ArTkY_
05/17/06, 06:07 PM
Haha, my bad.
haha, I kid. I enjoyed the post copy.

parallelism
05/17/06, 08:35 PM
haha, I kid. I enjoyed the post copy.

Haha, good, I am glad.