Ghost In The Room lyrics..criticize.

[light messenger]

Ignorance to my persistence
Your resistance to my insistence
Why don't you see what I mean?
You and me, our history

They should write books on this
Hundred page lessons on how you called it quits
So that they can teach the kids
How they should never end up like you did

Does the ends justify the means?
With me murdering everything that's you and me?

There's a ghost in the room
And it looks an awful lot like you
But what does this mean?
Why is it haunting all my dreams?
With it's misery

The cold sweeps over me
Taking the floor out from under my feet
Making my skin crawl
As it moves through my mind and my heart and the air and the walls

Does the ends justify the means?
With me murdering everything that's you and me?

There's a ghost in the room
And it looks an awful lot like you
But what does this mean?
Why is it haunting all my dreams?
With it's misery

Can you kill me tonight?
So God can be the only man in your life
Just like you wanted him to
Wait 'til I get my hands on you
We'll see how many more hearts you walk through

Does the ends justify the means?
With me exorcising your demons and bringing me peace?


There's a ghost in the room
And it looks an awful lot like you
But what does this mean?
Why is it haunting all my dreams?
With it's misery

[eliselovesmusic]

i love the rhyming. it made me smile :-)

the first two lines are the best.

sorry i can't be bothered writing real constructive critiscm.

[metalmauzen]

strong and quite simple I like it , but the first 2 lines (I like them a lot don't get me wrong) but in my opinion it doesn't quite fit with the rest...

[light messenger]

I think you're right; I may need to fix those. They're decent lines but sort of don't flow.

[metalmauzen]

exactly