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10/09/09, 02:18 PM
This is my newest writings and my first time posting any of my writings up here. The name is just a name so don't make a thing of it! This is a big long spiel I guess but the --- means that this is split into 3 parts. I'd really love any opinions on it, please and thank you :)
"Society Makes Cupid Hate Love..."
"some people are made for photos
just that one moment of beauty
that they can never catch again
the injustice of it all
some people are not made for photos
just that one moment, caught off guard
that they wish could disappear
the injustice of it all
we all have these things inside
that eat us up or make us alive
but the beauty society
is just all about a sex drive
if we were to turn inside out
we would see what we're all about
how we function, who we are
and from what was on show
we'd all really know
----
to continue in the similar vain
we all try and look the same
to obtain someones standards
we all try and do this in vein
the hypocrisy of writing this
I am sorry but it's all for a kiss
the inevitability of this all ending
who really wants a relationship anyways?
brought up on divorce and statistics on marriage
sorry but it really is offending
-----
to be told you're gonna end
before you reach the start
this is to you
this is to all
I feel and I feel something more
I love and I know that this heart and woe
go hand in hand, is it all for show?
I believe that justice is falling in love
to give and to take
to bend and to break
and in the end it's all for something
you're told to hate "
"Society Makes Cupid Hate Love..."
"some people are made for photos
just that one moment of beauty
that they can never catch again
the injustice of it all
some people are not made for photos
just that one moment, caught off guard
that they wish could disappear
the injustice of it all
we all have these things inside
that eat us up or make us alive
but the beauty society
is just all about a sex drive
if we were to turn inside out
we would see what we're all about
how we function, who we are
and from what was on show
we'd all really know
----
to continue in the similar vain
we all try and look the same
to obtain someones standards
we all try and do this in vein
the hypocrisy of writing this
I am sorry but it's all for a kiss
the inevitability of this all ending
who really wants a relationship anyways?
brought up on divorce and statistics on marriage
sorry but it really is offending
-----
to be told you're gonna end
before you reach the start
this is to you
this is to all
I feel and I feel something more
I love and I know that this heart and woe
go hand in hand, is it all for show?
I believe that justice is falling in love
to give and to take
to bend and to break
and in the end it's all for something
you're told to hate "