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alt_esc
10/09/09, 07:57 PM
On days left gone,
Unleft we seem to be.
i'll grasp movement,
Only misunderstanding meaning--
Not the statement.

Too take another wonder,
Would only leave me blind.
Confusion only thieves,
But casts what it has looted.
i wonder if it was the mood.

The theme, oh the theme.
What finds me most recently,
Or the last time i questioned--
It was the message;
The first attempt to learn a vital lesson.

Stop in stanzas,
Repeat the title.
Use evidence and question the poet.
If useful as ever,
He should recognize another cliche.

i only wish to form,
Not to find.
i don't want to grab,
Or pull,
Or ramble,
Nor speak of nonsense,
But feel, then act as if i felt first--
Then perform the lines.

They are my own,
All mine,
Yet i borrowed them out,
Only to be returned with perfection--
That i will never recieve.

On a simple note--
First of the day--
i am tired,
Unread of mistake,
At least outloud.

i share nothing,
Yet i record less.
i keep my time,
my secrets,
my words,
my questions--
The mistakes of many,
i fear.

alt_esc
05/23/10, 06:54 AM
bump?

alt_esc
05/31/11, 05:14 PM
boom bumpa bum..

sugarvilleheart
06/01/11, 04:49 AM
That's really Good Altesc. Sporadic but Nice. :)