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ImpulZe
05/18/06, 06:00 AM
First off after reading over this it sucks hardcore but I am posting it anyways, who knows maybe you will like it..

The Pointless Story


Oh my, Critics never Lie
Empty walls and stages
Line the back of your mind
and yes, pictures hold the key
to the world we could of have
the world of you and me

Oh, but nothing ever Ends
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken
oh, somethings never die
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken Inside

Oh, mothers never try
they only give you direction
then turn to the other side
you, you headed west, the city that
never sleeps, the city that never rests

Oh, but nothing ever Ends
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken
oh, somethings never die
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken Inside

Sometimes the stroies are rewrittent to control with the times of heartatteacks
sometimes the ending are false and the truth is hidden behind the facts
everytime you get what you give ans in this case your pratically starving
Pointless stories line your bedroom walls and nothing ever ceases to find me

Oh, but nothing ever Ends
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken
oh, somethings never die
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken Inside

Oh, but nothing ever Ends
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken
oh, somethings never die
nothing ever ceases to find me
Buried and Broken Inside

ImpulZe
05/18/06, 07:14 AM
yikes this forum is slow in the morning.

a speedo model
05/18/06, 07:41 AM
it's okay. nothing really stood out to me.

iHATEapril
05/18/06, 12:41 PM
You can do better. It's weaker than your other song.

ArTkY_
05/18/06, 12:59 PM
This is definetly good, but not as good as the other one you just posted. Too repetitive.