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ImpulZe
05/18/06, 06:07 AM
Cliffhangers (to Avenge the Unrelaible)


Honey..Honey..Were taking the long way home tonight...

Passing sidewalks as we creep up to the sky(oh,oh,oh,oh)
Trees and power lines are passing in my eyes(no,no,no,no)
Listening to all the stations that replay the tune(oh,oh,oh,oh)
Dancing with rain clouds, honey I'll be home soon

Lets start a war (Lets start a war)
Lets start a fight (Lets start a fight)
Lets sit with empty glances and stare up to the night
when the gods pour dow the rain, and shed us with their tears
then we''l go home, then we'll go home, we'll go...

Dial the numbers, the lines on disary
switch all the circuits, make night into day
Follow the footsteps, they'll lead you to the ledge
Pick up the phone, the words push off the...edge.

Lets start a war (Lets start a war)
Lets start a fight (Lets start a fight)
Lets sit with empty glances and stare up to the night
when the gods pour dow the rain, and shed us with their tears
then we''l go home, then we'll go home, we'll go...

I want to go home, come or stay
Make a visit or stay a day
Nothing ever changes, the price to tell
a cheating husband, it serves him well

I want to go home, come or stay
Make a visit or stay a day
Nothing ever changes, the price to tell
a cheating husband, it serves him well

Lets start a war (Lets start a war)
Lets start a fight (Lets start a fight)
Lets sit with empty glances and stare up to the night
when the gods pour dow the rain, and shed us with their tears
then we''l go home, then we'll go home, we'll go...

ImpulZe
05/18/06, 07:14 AM
yikes this forum is slow in the morning.

a speedo model
05/18/06, 07:47 AM
i like this one.

ArTkY_
05/18/06, 10:27 AM
Honey..Honey..Were taking the long way home tonight...

Passing sidewalks as we creep up to the sky(oh,oh,oh,oh)
Trees and power lines are passing in my eyes(no,no,no,no)
Listening to all the stations that replay the tune(oh,oh,oh,oh)
Dancing with rain clouds, honey I'll be home soon

I love that part a lot. This was very good. The chorus is pretty sweet, catchy. Great job.

wyverna
05/18/06, 10:54 AM
You've really got better. I like this line: when the gods pour dow the rain, and shed us with their tears. Good work.

ImpulZe
05/18/06, 11:50 AM
thanks everyone

iHATEapril
05/18/06, 12:39 PM
Awesome job. Big improvement.