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KeKe-Swagger
10/20/09, 05:08 PM
What i spit is fuken cleva

I aint afriad to the pull the trigga

and blow your brain on the dressa

Your raps are fuking dry kinda like the Sahara

When I run up on the block I always bring the Terra

Fuck your rap crew its the Set Boyz era

Pussy ass ****** go and wear your tiara

Yah Im in your fantasy ride like ciara

I never been fucked in the game im abstinence

Countin dirty money my hands i need to rinse

Im deep in this shit your only shallow

I spit so much fire they should call me spyro

I will lean your shit as if you was playing limbo

I will drop you guys below zero

Slicing ****** up like Kimbo

Got money thats why i spend them

Everywhere i go all the hoes pay attention

Bridgeports what im reppin

Kid Swag 1 word perfection

Look at my complexion

No need for correction

Look at your shit and one word infection

I forgot to mention

Im fuken this rap game using no protection
bladerdude360
10/20/09, 08:07 PM
God damnit.
HometownHero
10/20/09, 08:20 PM
God damnit.

Do you hate rap yet?
bladerdude360
10/20/09, 08:26 PM
Do you hate rap yet?
Haha I actually like rap. This stuff is just bad, though...he's so persistent that I'm not sure if he's a fake. If he isn't and he actually writes rhymes like these and thinks they're good, then something is very wrong.
OdeToTheSun
10/20/09, 08:27 PM
Ugh
HometownHero
10/20/09, 08:28 PM
Haha I actually like rap. This stuff is just bad, though...he's so persistent that I'm not sure if he's a fake. If he isn't and he actually writes rhymes like these and thinks they're good, then something is very wrong.

Its the fact he never responds that kills me. Haha I love rap but this kid is an idiot for even thinking this is rap.
fly_guy
10/20/09, 08:31 PM
I never been fucked in the game im abstinence

Countin dirty money my hands i need to rinse

Im deep in this shit your only shallow

I spit so much fire they should call me spyro

I will lean your shit as if you was playing limbo

I will drop you guys below zero

Slicing ****** up like Kimbo

Favorite part!
bladerdude360
10/20/09, 08:34 PM
Its the fact he never responds that kills me. Haha I love rap but this kid is an idiot for even thinking this is rap.
Exactly! Like I said before, it's just the same rhym form over and over again. It's lame the first time, and it's just as lame the 17th time haha. I think he's responded like once or twice before, but I agree, it'd be nice to hear what he has to say.
HometownHero
10/20/09, 08:52 PM
Exactly! Like I said before, it's just the same rhym form over and over again. It's lame the first time, and it's just as lame the 17th time haha. I think he's responded like once or twice before, but I agree, it'd be nice to hear what he has to say.

All he'd say is "fuck ya'll bitches for hatin" or something equally stupid haha
Chemical Swirl
10/20/09, 09:14 PM
Keke spits hot fire.
MADSTA
10/20/09, 09:16 PM
Wurd to ya mutha.
mick2late
10/20/09, 09:28 PM
Bridgeports what im reppin

That explains everything.
ImTheSheriff
10/20/09, 10:02 PM
"who are the 5 best rappers in this world? dylan, dylan, dylan, dylan, and DYLAN!"
tait
10/20/09, 10:24 PM
gg
Formatfun
10/20/09, 10:43 PM
Sick. Continue making threads like this, we love to read these.
This guy has a huge career ahead of him.
argg_xo
10/20/09, 10:44 PM
This is just pure lyrical genius.
abandonship
10/21/09, 01:24 AM
is it sad that i actually enjoy these