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ImpulZe
05/24/06, 06:05 AM
The News Airs at Seven

News Conference set for six
signals through the air
Press comes to me
floods from every square
Questions burn like Fire
The Fire turns to smoke
Trapped inside these questions
Trapped with no where to go

Is this a murder scene
was there foul play
will it be life in prison
or will he stay a day
was it a homicide
or a suicide of sort
answer my question
news airs at seven

Listening like tap wires
in a sound proof room
neslted in their notepads the answers
like a mothers womb
Conference moves to six thirty
escaping reality, nothing just happened
This Conference is over, the news airs at seven!

Is this a murder scene
was there foul play
will it be life in prison
or will he stay a day
was it a homicide
or a suicide of sort
answer my question
news airs at seven

Tonights top story
horror on fifth
it was a terrible scene
of blood spilled guilt
the funeral is set
for wednesday the tenth
the communtiy is mourning
the community is in defense

Is this a murder scene
was there foul play
will it be life in prison
or will he stay a day
was it a homicide
or a suicide of sort
answer my question
news airs at seven



The news airs at seven
The news airs at seven...

ImpulZe
05/24/06, 06:37 AM
i less than three news

ImpulZe
05/24/06, 07:03 AM
responses?

a speedo model
05/24/06, 07:47 AM
it's good. i don't know, but something about it just didn't click with me.

SLADE775
05/24/06, 09:43 AM
I don't like it.

wyverna
05/24/06, 10:51 AM
it seemed a bit bland. didn't do anything for me. sorry.

parallelism
05/24/06, 11:36 AM
No offense, but I really, really, really didn't like this.

It's not the worst thing I've ever read, but it just seems like a big metaphor for nothing. There weren't any lines that sparked my interest. I was expecting the piece to eventually direct me somewhere and it went nowhere.

ImpulZe
05/25/06, 05:40 AM
it seemed a bit bland. didn't do anything for me. sorry.

It was rather boring lol