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Barthelme_fan
10/25/09, 05:38 PM
From my bereft incomplete archives, I think it's too schmaltzy but what do you think? (These are not the words, see below)

Fingers through your hair
At your eyes I stared
There was something there
like a bird

Gone and flown away
flapping, fleeting
Not caring to stay

out my window with the wind
Carrying my heart between your wings

And when it all falls down
Will you be in the sky or on the ground?