The Same Melody On Repeat

[Music Bunny]

Nothing is wrong with me,
It's just the first day of many in which you are no longer here.
I stare in to a mirror that is cracked and broken,
and I smile because I'm perfect,
Perfectly flawed.
Hiding behind what everyone sees,
Is a person that still cries over your lifeless body.
Where you cracked and broken on the inside like I am now?
You burned with the brightness of the sun,
Reaching hands out towards you,
I wished to be burned.
Nothing is wrong with me,
I'm perfect,
Perfectly flawed,I have the scares to prove it.
Nothings wrong with me,
I'm perfect....

um yeah sooo it was just something floating around in my head. Nothing big or great but okay...:unsure:

[matt_rawlings]

Nothing is wrong with me,
It's just the first day of many in which you are no longer here.
I stare in to a mirror that is cracked and broken,
and I smile because I'm perfect,
Perfectly flawed.
Hiding behind what everyone sees,
Is a person that still cries over your lifeless body.
Where you cracked and broken on the inside like I am now?
You burned with the brightness of the sun,
Reaching hands out towards you,
I wished to be burned.
Nothing is wrong with me,
I'm perfect,
Perfectly flawed,I have the scares to prove it.
Nothings wrong with me,
I'm perfect....

The Stuff in Bold is the stuff I think is alright, the stuff underlined is the stuff that screams generic

[a speedo model]

i agree with matt. but keep working on it, it takes time.

[wyverna]

It seems a little cliched. Try again, though, because you seem to have potential.