Chapter VII: The Beast From The Earth

[SockMonkeyRiot]

Chapter VII: The Beast From The Earth

Upside-down faces line my wall
lipless I kiss, eyeless I watch
for rain to fall in my bedroom mirror
to drown all the lovers and wipe the slate clean

I'll make you one to believe
in this web I so carefully weave

I'll build my arc of stick and stone
one to sink, one to float
a vagabond prophet painted in script
reads "I am the alpha and the omega"

and I'll be your muse in the end
whisper sweet lies to your death

[wyverna]

I like this, especially;

lipless I kiss, eyeless I watch

I don't like the title very much, but the actual thing is really good. I really like it. Good work.

[a speedo model]

i agree, it's very good. i especially like the last two lines. keep it up.

[SockMonkeyRiot]

Thank you very much.

[A picasso blue]

its a lot better the other stuff in this forum, i'll give ya that

[OveriseFan]

lipless I kiss

Kissing the lipless?

[SockMonkeyRiot]

I guess... yes.. yes that would be the action that I'm describing.

[OveriseFan]

I guess... yes.. yes that would be the action that I'm describing.

I meant you ripped off the Shins...

ass.

You know what I meant to, I can tell from your post.

Cue: "I've never listened to the Shins"

[SockMonkeyRiot]

I don't care what the shins called one of their songs, it's a good song but it wasn't on my mind when I wrote this song. If we start condemning all combinations of words that have been used before then there won't be much more to write.