11:11

[shortone1320]

a new one, just post a comment please...
11:11

Even when he sees her
So confused by her
Can’t understand it
Don’t wanna understand it
Just accept it
Lovin’ bit by bit
Just happy to entertain the thought
The way her body moves
The way it speaks to him
And all the subtlety you do
Did he go wrong?
Cause she takes his words and go
No answer for him to know
Now he has to go
Not by choice, it’s all school

The Fray hit the note
With over my head
Her picture by his bed
The lamp left him blind
And she walked out of the haze
Confused, in a daze
She turned out the light
Rests his head and she disappears
Into his dreams
Into the stars he stares
He’s well aware

Just like Konstantine
Jimmy Eat World right on time
Phone calls an alarm
Now she wants to talk
He closes his eyes and hold on
Listen to her voice through the receiver
He longs to see her
Makes a wish

Her picture makes him long for home
He’s looking forward never back
Forgetting yesterday
And missing goodbyes
Yesterday is history
And history is far away
Left to himself everyday
Everyday left to wishing
And look its 11:11

[shortone1320]

nothin?

[HoldThatSound]

thats an all american rejects song title just so you know but watevs

[DanPiazza]

no shit you're from clinton, ma? i'm from lancaster dude.

i like it, i just couldn't figure out the structure. then again, not all songs need a structure to be great.

[crazymorbid]

its really good.

its like telling how he misses the one he loves but theres a thing that keeps them apart =) i really like it

[mulcahy67]

really, really, really, cheesy. but if youre ok with that then whatever.

[Matt Chylak]

you strung together existing song lyrics. how does that contribute anything original to the world?

[jcrawfish]

sucks dick

[Kirsty.com]

is it meant to be a song or a poem?

[11:11]

I do not approve of this work.

[DevinDomino]

Very expected Konstantine and JEW refrences.