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OveriseFan
06/06/06, 06:05 PM
Board up the windows
Shut out the sun
We are all silhouettes
Who's shadows came undone
Oh, but this was never meant to go so far...


I'll be the tree roots underneath you
The poured concrete right beneath you
I will fix these faded photographs
To make sure you'll stay here forever.


Whoa
I'm in love with magazines
And this vixen who infects my dreams
This was never meant to go so far...


Board up the windows
To shut out the rain
It washes away everything
Now I know nothing seems the same
Oh, but this was never meant to go so far...


I'll be the tree roots underneath you
The poured concrete right beneath you
I will fix these faded photographs
To make sure you'll stay here forever.


Whoa
I'm in love with magazines
And this vixen who infects my dreams
This was never meant to go so far...


Could you speak a little faster darling?
So your words make even less sense
What good are definitions
If words don’t mean a thing?

matt_rawlings
06/06/06, 06:09 PM
Fucking classy job once again

OveriseFan
06/06/06, 06:12 PM
Fucking classy job once again

I love you!

Thank you so much, I need to get music to this and uh... I forget the name of it but the one with the chorus "Watch my ink drawn ballerina... blah blah blah clichexcore". Yeah. Recordings soon now that I finally am out of school. :)

a speedo model
06/07/06, 09:50 AM
good stuff. i'd like to hear it when you're done with it, i really enjoyed it. great job, man.



p.s. go read my new one..:)

wyverna
06/07/06, 10:51 AM
I love this part:

We are all silhouettes
Who's shadows came undone

There's just something about it that sticks. You did a great job with this; never fail to impress me. Well done.

OveriseFan
06/07/06, 06:56 PM
I love you all.

And Grace, that's my favorite line too *tear*

Second would be the "vixen" one. Reminds me of Ginny

I 'reference' Harry Potter too much haha.

de la sympathie
06/10/06, 08:38 AM
James, I still love you. Your work just keeps getting better and better every time I read a new piece. It seems like you've finally grown out of that awkward stage, where alot of things didn't seem to fit, and now it just flows alot more... classically? Elegantly? Anyways, it's good, it's quality. Keep it up (not that you ever would stop!).

OveriseFan
06/10/06, 06:30 PM
It's funny you say that Shauna, because I've developed like an inferiority complex about writing. I think everythings terrible now, or else isn't what I want it to be. I can't fit music to any of it which is pissing me off, and I always feel like my stuff could be lightyears better.

I know I shouldn't think like that, but whatever. Everyone likes it, so I guess it's decent.

iHATEapril
06/10/06, 06:33 PM
Word *** I saw this on aim and told you it was well done.