Life is a Screenplay

[DanPiazza]

So I scrapped the three songs I posted here the other day. I went back to the drawing boards with the suggestions I received. This is is what I ended up with.

Life is a Screenplay

the sun's light broke through the night
and dreams come to an end
the whole world's waking up
but your thoughts stay in bed

this day never feels right;
tomorrow will be the same
follow trends and the media
all of this in life's vein

the author's mind spilled on the page
his work was worth much praise
a masterful story this man could tell
as he wrote your life into hell

this path is long and dark
no chance to make mistakes
and the choices you've made
are just ripples in the wake

uncertainty comes often
your fate's been engrained
follow god and your friends
with hopes of bitter fame

the author's mind spilled on the page
his work was worthy of much praise
a masterful story this man could tell
as he wrote your life into hell

they say that history is bound to repeat itself
so rewrite the books, and put them back on the shelf

breathe in the air that comes with conciousness
think out of of the box; be proud to be boundless

now the author's mind is blocked
and the spark sets you free
from a lifetime of damnation
to a place you want to be

[DanPiazza]

i changed a few things, anyone want to see the new version?

[DanPiazza]

bump? :(

[jeff crawford]

Sucks.