New School

[scream.yor<3out]

I try to fit in, i try to impress
I try to look good but without success
your brutal honesty stares me in the face
as i trip over thoughts of hate in this unfamiliar place.




...yeah. i don't like it much but Lia told me to put it on here. any comments?

[OveriseFan]

If you don't like something, you should know what we think. :wink:

Anyway, I hope this terrifies you.

The first rhyming couplet was pretty good. After that, it was really bad, overdone stuff.

[wyverna]

Post something you like. If you like it, chances are it will be better. And put something on here because you want to, not because someone else wants you to.

I don't much like this, but I have a feeling you can do better.

[a speedo model]

work on it. this is not very good but it takes time.