crimsonsleeves
11/23/09, 06:45 AM
post thoughts, criticism, or even praise... i have a lot more so if this is worth it, i'll post more.
how so abruptly he has come to notice
that the mercury has fallen everywhere
it's a distinct chill within the column
of when he thinks it's his time to perish
from all of her grey and her central clock
it's the carbon he's so lost in now
the gears aren't turning like he needs them to
they now live in a life of lightning and ghosts
where the lions have total acquisition of the storm
giving both of them no reason to believe that
if they look below this constructed dimension
of the worlds most fragile iron and lead
a piece of vulcans work might still remain
and with just enough from the chimes creator
it could expose what has been concealed
from the eyes that need to be alive
and that they can relive the ambition
to become their wraith of being a solitaire diamond
how so abruptly he has come to notice
that the mercury has fallen everywhere
it's a distinct chill within the column
of when he thinks it's his time to perish
from all of her grey and her central clock
it's the carbon he's so lost in now
the gears aren't turning like he needs them to
they now live in a life of lightning and ghosts
where the lions have total acquisition of the storm
giving both of them no reason to believe that
if they look below this constructed dimension
of the worlds most fragile iron and lead
a piece of vulcans work might still remain
and with just enough from the chimes creator
it could expose what has been concealed
from the eyes that need to be alive
and that they can relive the ambition
to become their wraith of being a solitaire diamond