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SLADE775
06/13/06, 03:47 PM
Benxi Nights

Look at you
All fast and coated
A Styrofoam bond is what you’re left with
Do tell me -- how you plan to get out of this
I’m just so damn curious

You waste yourself
Feed the wolves by hand
How sad – it’s so sad
Go ahead and shake their hands
While they penetrate your crooked stance

You waste!!!
A burden -- yeah I’ll say
Like the calm shore solied by the sea
You’re too much
Lay it on -- such a thick, thick crust
And whatever there was -- has long sense been used up

You waste yourself
Feed the wolves by hand
How sad -- it’s so sad
go ahead and shake their hands
While they penetrate your crooked stance

You’ve got it backwards -- no ones waiting
There’s no chance for a relapse remaining
If it’s a matter of visuals you’re more than lacking
I just might -- throw you back
And go find another town to solve
Another lost cause
To distract
matt_rawlings
06/13/06, 03:53 PM
You’ve got it backwards -- no ones waiting
There’s no chance for a relapse remaining
If it’s a matter of visuals you’re more than lacking
I just might -- throw you back
And go find another town to solve
Another lost cause
To distract
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Fucking excellent part


Good work Slade
SLADE775
06/13/06, 03:58 PM
Fucking excellent part


Good work Slade

Thanks dude...

I loved your latest work as well.
matt_rawlings
06/13/06, 03:59 PM
Thanks dude...

I loved your latest work as well.

Thanks alot man.

How crazy is shit getting in the general forum? I can't be fucked with it now
FScott
06/13/06, 11:22 PM
boring
jusscali
06/13/06, 11:25 PM
Thanks alot man.

How crazy is shit getting in the general forum? I can't be fucked with it now
whats so crazy about it matty? fill me in ive been gone for a few days.

pretty good slade, rawlings last work was a delight as well. even though im not much for the AP Poet Society. i wrote alot of shit when my long term relationship got the ax, but with therapy and recovery came the throwing away of the pen and pad.
jusscali
06/13/06, 11:26 PM
boring
hahahaha i knew that was coming
FScott
06/13/06, 11:27 PM
hahah did ya!
jusscali
06/13/06, 11:28 PM
oh slade looks like we got a wise guy in here

devious
FScott
06/13/06, 11:30 PM
Oh does iT! oh i dont know slade what are we gonna do about this charactor who likes to express his opinions!
iHATEapril
06/14/06, 07:22 AM
Good job, the end was well done. Up until the end it was more of just okay, but it came together well.
SLADE775
06/14/06, 07:41 AM
boring

If you don't know me, you don't matter.

You silly ass bitch.
a speedo model
06/14/06, 07:49 AM
i really enjoyed it, especially the end. good work, slade.
SLADE775
06/14/06, 08:12 AM
i really enjoyed it, especially the end. good work, slade.

Thanks dude.
FScott
06/14/06, 08:48 PM
oh okay so if people think its good and they don't know you then it does matter. perfect sense.
iHATEapril
06/14/06, 09:09 PM
You're welcome, Mr. ungrateful.
jusscali
06/14/06, 09:12 PM
You're welcome, Mr. ungrateful.
he hates you .

muhahahaha