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mulcahy67
11/25/09, 03:42 AM
Take a step, step back
Here's your favorite shot of dignity and grace
Take a piece, piece back
For everything I've taken, you deserve just as much
You didn't think this was an absence of faith, did you?
Well surely you could see the cracks in my skull

I never should have left
I never should have left
I never should have left
I never should have

Hey, I'm a thousand miles away
Can you hear me shouting for you?
Can you hear me screaming your name?
Hey, these shackles aren't hard to break
But the memories they will remain
These travesties stay the same

Where has my time, time gone
Tripping over hedges getting eaten up by the earth
Where has my soul, soul gone
When the door opens, that's when the story ends
You didn't think it was a great mystery, did you?
Just another cold case, solved and laid to rest

The time has come, I spin through the motions
The storm keeps coming, we take no precautions
Shed myself, along this starry night
Let these vultures, circle and entrench my body parts

Dead Poet
11/25/09, 05:58 AM
I never should have left
I never should have left
I never should have left
I never should have


I would leave one I never should have left, I think two is enough. I liked the rest, although I would like a stronger ending.
That's my opinion, do with it whatever you want.

jeff crawford
12/02/09, 01:13 AM
Gay