//Black Out\\

[Dead Poet]

This is a rewriting of the third lyrics I've written in my life.
Please feel free to comment on it. (good or bad)


~™Black Out˜~

Falling away from reality
Everything around me is unreal
I can’t tell for sure
But I think I’m going to Black Out

I really don’t know any more
Hiding in the dark corners of my life
Forgetting everything because of
My slowly decaying core
Can’t think about anything
Unable to concentrate myself
Drowning in my surreality
My surroundings changing

I’m seeing different layers of gray
Even seeing different layers of black
I’m starting to Black Out!

Fighting my inner demons
Distracted my outer torments
I can’t find my peace of mind
Collapsing under a wall of pressure

Why do you want me to?
Why do you need me to?
Please, I can’t help you

Why do you want me to?
Why do you need me to?
Please believe me when I say I cant help you

Time isn’t on my side
I’m losing all my memories
Nowhere to hide
Nowhere to go to
Pressure is building up again

Now is the time to erase
Forget all my memories
Because I don’t want to face
The duties bestowed upon me

Why do you want me to?
Why do you need me to?
Please, I can’t help you

Why do you want me to?
Why do you need me to?
Please believe me when I say I cant help you

I really don’t know any more
Hiding in the dark corners of my life
Forgetting everything because of
My slowly decaying core

Let me go
Let me go
Let me go with my own despair

Let me go
Let me go
Let me go with my own despair

You know that I’m beyond redemption
You’re the only one that can see
That this is perfect for me

I’m seeing different layers of black
Even seeing different layers of black
And now I know without any guilt
That now is my time to come

So I can finally
Black Out!

[Wackhead]

I remembeerrr
it's gotten better and better, eh ?
i like how u have changed it to a more realistic song :-d, the first one was a little bit unrelated IMO.
good work;-)
i'm luuking vorward vorking vith yuu. :-p

[jeff crawford]

Sucks

[Dead Poet]

Sucks


Ok, thanks for the feedback :P

[TheReckoner]

Aren't you dead...?

[Dead Poet]

Aren't you dead...?



Seriously, super lame joke (still roflolled though :P)

[TheReckoner]

Seriously, super lame joke (still roflolled though :P)
I live to make dead people roll on the floor and laugh out loud, I guess.

[gabriellemariee]

this is reaaalllyyy good! :] the only thing I didn't like was this "I’m seeing different layers of gray
Even seeing different layers of black" but other than that, l.o.v.e.d. it!

[Dead Poet]

this is reaaalllyyy good! :] the only thing I didn't like was this "I’m seeing different layers of gray
Even seeing different layers of black" but other than that, l.o.v.e.d. it!


Thank you very much! I wasn't sure about the layers part either :P

[Wackhead]

I live to make dead people roll on the floor and laugh out loud, I guess.

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[TheReckoner]

ILTMDPROTFALOL,IG

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Thats magic.

[ElephantGun]

I actually like this, when it isn't something I usually would. Could make a great song!

[Dead Poet]

I actually like this, when it isn't something I usually would. Could make a great song!

Thanks for the great complement =)

[Wackhead]

Thats magic.

TM*