Getting to the door just in time to watch it shut

[chris868]

the song is on this one

[OveriseFan]

Just post them in the forum next time.

That pre-chorus is ridiculously long.

[a speedo model]

i don't know, there's nothing really bad with it, it just seems a tad too simple and just long. and when i read that "my dad says i'm a silly boy, i say i'm just a man" i thought of britney spears. keep it up, though. continue to work on it.....

[matt_rawlings]

1: Don't attatch, copy and paste

2: I cannot see how that would ever work as an actual song, with music

3: It was average

[a speedo model]

matt, go read my song at the bottom of the page.