vilification

[mulcahy67]

angry, bitter, alone
a checklist to your finest attribute
lower the standards, settle for offensive
there's no you, but there's no me
the screws are loose and the ride is crashing
with everything burning i notice you don't look so bad

you won't do any better, you won't do at all
there's no ugly truth, because we're all liars
scream for strict duplication
as the spiders scream for more skin

oh oh, i seem to sense more than i should
i've never been inside the beast this deep
but at least here i ain't so lonely

addiction, addiction
i've more vices than a dungeon
chained and true, scarred black and blue
there's no you, but there's no me
the wood is chipping, the roof will crumble
but we're all dead so we've got it covered

we won't do any better, we won't do at all
but it's okay, we're way too drunk to notice

[Idealist80]

angry, bitter, alone
a checklist to your finest attribute
lower the standards, settle for offensive
there's no you, but there's no me
the screws are loose and the ride is crashing
with everything burning i notice you don't look so bad

you won't do any better, you won't do at all
there's no ugly truth, because we're all liars
scream for strict duplication
as the spiders scream for more skin

oh oh, i seem to sense more than i should
i've never been inside the beast this deep
but at least here i ain't so lonely

addiction, addiction
i've more vices than a dungeon
chained and true, scarred black and blue
there's no you, but there's no me
the wood is chipping, the roof will crumble
but we're all dead so we've got it covered

we won't do any better, we won't do at all
but it's okay, we're way too drunk to notice

I like the bolded parts
You use alot of random images, and I had no idea there was any drinking involved in this untill the last line.
Overall not bad just need to be more specific with lyrics about what the song is about.

[mulcahy67]

haha it is a lot of random images i agree. its kinda cryptic, makes more sense to me, its kind of just my style. some people dig, some people dont. the whole drinking thing again is just a random line thrown in, once again, with a reference to something i could explain but it would take a hella long time.

thanks for the input man.

[ElephantGun]

I enjoy this, and the random images may just be random to people who can't relate. I enjoy songs like this because they leave a lot to my imagination. The greatest songs are simple yet detailed. Get what I mean?
I enjoy these lyrics, keep it up!
cheers
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