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GhostFight
12/11/09, 12:21 PM
post any short things youve always liked but never really knew what to do with

last night:

plastic bag theories don't hold no water
'cause they all got holes.



wacha got?

Idealist80
12/11/09, 12:27 PM
I came up with this one last night but I dont know how to incorporate it yet

If you want to be free
Be free
Just know that
It takes more than a mirror
To see the beauty

Idealist80
12/11/09, 12:28 PM
post any short things youve always liked but never really knew what to do with

last night:

plastic bag theories don't hold no water
'cause they all got holes.



wacha got?


I think that is pretty bland, but has some potential if you mix up the wordage.

Barthelme_fan
12/11/09, 12:32 PM
I'm looking at the future
The past's behind my head
I look from side to side
I missed now I'm dead

GhostFight
12/11/09, 03:35 PM
your probably right, it just made a lot of sense at the time

stealthpeng
12/12/09, 07:48 PM
They ransacked my house
called me a joke
got blood on my face
then called for a toast
all in the name
of being old ghosts