Like the Rumbling in the Distance

[stealthpeng]

This is not the end
but I feel I have a feeling, it's coming from a mile away

you're struggling on the phone
already--I know

I don't know why I hate clean breaks
I don't know

like the rumbling in the distance
from the train I cannot see
there's thoughts of us breaking
pounding in my ears

I thought I fought so hard
but I'm not fighting anymore
--those clichéd words echo
just as that clichéd phrase

echoes, echoes

this is not the end
but I feel I have a feeling
it's coming

it's coming

it's coming

it's coming

I just wish I had heard it in you first
because the sound of you coming to leave is only a pin-drop in my bucket

I got hit by a train of thought
I should have heard it from a mile away
deaf to thoughts I don't want to hear

please end well.

[ElephantGun]

Another song fom you, which I like also. It is similar to the other song emotionally, I think?
It sounds like it would make quite a beautiful song. Really being honest.

[stealthpeng]

Both use trains... and both deal with me having tension with my girlfriend being out of the country. This one is a little more tense to me than the other one, however