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DavidProd
12/13/09, 12:36 PM
[Intro]

baby, listen up, this one is for you

[Verse 1]

the first time i saw you
it was clear to see
you were the girl
that was meant for me

everything was fine
till i played the fool
then you said goodbye
and stepped away with another dude


[Chorus]

baby i wanna show you another world,
a world were there's no war
a world were lovers never go apart,
apart,
apart

now the days and night go bye,
without you by my side
you got me lying in my bed,
looking at the stars,
praying and wishing
that you come back in my life
my life,
my life

[Verse 2]

back in the winter
it was white and cold
i was the guy
that held you safe and warm
but now it's another guy
standing at my place
and the thought of that
just shows my tears

[Chorus]

baby i wanna show you another world,
a world were there's no war
a world were lovers never go apart,
apart,
apart,

now the days and night go bye,
without you by my side
you got me lying in my bed,
looking at the stars,
praying and wishing
that you come back in my life
my life
my life

[Verse 3]

so baby, what you planning to do
cause i wanna be next to you
i wanna hold you tight
and love you till the morning light

mulcahy67
12/13/09, 01:27 PM
if you were going for simple plan, you win.
if you weren't, then eh. kind of a loss.

it really cheesy. the first two verses play off really, really lame, and most of it just seems really whiny without anything powerfully descriptive or connecting to the emotions than the basics.