Insomnia

[Jabble524]

Insomnia

Romance awakens the unconscious
And in heartbreak it never sleeps
An insomnia of revelations
Shattered promises, we swore to keep

Paper tigers and Icarus wings
Fly to the sun, when the siren sings
Oedipus eyes to navigate the maze
False bravado, caught in the minotaur’s gaze

Your Prometheus Kiss
Stole the fire from my heart
The eagle is my friend
But you tear me apart

Luscious lips and Freudian slips
Red herrings lead me into your arms
Denial is a warm bed, and a lustful lover
On a night of cold truth

[Jabble524]

If anyone has time, I would love feedback.

[lfdfforever]

The concept is a bit cliche, but the placement of the words works well with it.

[beccasaysXRAWRX]

The concept is a bit cliche, but the placement of the words works well with it.


touche.

either way that line romance awakes the unconscious im going to have that going through my head alot i think its good but make sure you get the music right with it or it will suck

[Jabble524]

Thanks.