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McCarthy62088
12/21/09, 10:09 AM
Walking alongside the horizon
Looking for someone, who?
Sipping all these lies and
don't know what to do

Been around this town seeking
spots to cure my flu
Breathe in the burning life hoping
it comes around to you

Precious ripped away my innocence
suffocated relief thickly passes through
Wish I knew my ignorance
Would have never loved, who?

Who turned me psycho, and
started this relentless cycle
Feeling insane
But no more pain

xmy.only.exitx
12/22/09, 01:52 AM
the rhyming feels a little strange.
especially the "who" jumps out and grabs your throat. sorry.
but try again.