let me know what you think...

[DreamingGallow]

how long do you expect, me to keep keep this cape on?
I can on be super until the end of this song..
and at the end of this verse, im looking at the sky.
Because I do have a weakness, but its not kryptonite.
im doing my best to show you affection,
you can wear all my lies, keep them close for your protection,
but what ever you do dont make me tell the truth because im afraid of my weakness and what it might do..

[makeshiftmind]

cliche, comma needless in the first line, overall nothing special

[DreamingGallow]

OOOo lol ok.. so out of five? 1 lowest 5 highest

[makeshiftmind]

2.3/5

[mattattack]

lyrics don't matter unless they are paired with music...... if that was a poem I would give it 0/5. if paired with the right music, could be much higher.

[LoginBanned]

Very Pete Wentz

[kbi the crowing]

lyrics don't matter unless they are paired with music...... if that was a poem I would give it 0/5. if paired with the right music, could be much higher.

this

[oddwithoutend]

lyrics don't matter unless they are paired with music
This is a stretch. while the quality of lyrics partially depends on how well it synchronizes with the music and vocals, a lot of its value can usually be discerned by simply reading.

[MonopolyMan]

sounds good man...keep it up.