Gift For My Little Sister.

[Akissforher]

Ok normally this wouldnt be a PL forum thing but i think it should cause its sort of meant a Christmas present for my little sister and i wanted to know if this is a good idea as a little side present or not;



I can see the hurt in your eyes
I can see you fight back the tears
He's hurt you beyond recognition
You feel like you world is crashing
The pulse in your veins is flatlining
I can see your heart broken into pieces

Notes of a failed attempt line your bedroom walls
You shut your blinds to block out his face

Cause boys do they want
And boy it can hurt.
But I swear to protect you from the pain
Absent from you i still want to save you
All i want is to see you smile and free from hurt
Dont hold back your fears for me
Let me in and take away your pain my dear
Have faith in my love
I will show you the way if you take my hand
Let the world see your smile once again
Ive been waiting for a friend like you
Let me help you pick you up when you fall


No matter what i will be by your side
Through the hurt and the pain
To the happiness and smiles
Just let me be in your life
Together we can make it through
with you.. my little sister...

[kaycey]

how little is she?

[kaycey]

actually it doesn't matter just give her something twilighty.

[Akissforher]

shes actually 15, too old, too young?

[Alaina <3]

I think it's good. Depending on how she is, she'll either love it or be a little weirded out about it. I really have no idea.

[Akissforher]

I think it's good. Depending on how she is, she'll either love it or be a little weirded out about it. I really have no idea.

well shes recently been hurt badly by her now ex boyfriend so im hoping this might lift up her spirits.

[matt_bergeron]

well shes recently been hurt badly by her now ex boyfriend so im hoping this might lift up her spirits.


in the words of some song "15 and falling in love, you're far too young to be versed in such grown up ways" YMEWK

[Akissforher]

in the words of some song "15 and falling in love, you're far too young to be versed in such grown up ways" YMEWK

hey i like that, pardon my ignorance but what does YMEWK mean?

[superdork]

hey i like that, pardon my ignorance but what does YMEWK mean?
You, Me, And Every One We Know. it's a band.

And, Speaking as a 16 year old little sister who is currently going through a break up, I have a feeling she will love it. =)

[Akissforher]

You, Me, And Every One We Know. it's a band.

And, Speaking as a 16 year old little sister who is currently going through a break up, I have a feeling she will love it. =)


haha i feel dumb now i know of them, so obvious now i think of it lol.

aww thank you so much i really hope she does :)
and i hope things are going okay in your situation too =)

[Corgkowznor]

Color me dumb, but I've heard of both (and actually seen live) You Me and Everyone We Know and The Receiving End of Sirens and when I read threads talking about YMEWK and TREOS, especially about them at skatefest, i was confused...i felt ignorant. But i don't feel like those are normal acronyms, call me crazy.

[LoginBanned]

This is kind of creepy but teenage girls eat this crap up, just not sure if they do coming from their brother

[andresr200]

that's a nice gesture I think. :)

[SteveD]

Condoms safer bet.

[timb89]

Condoms safer bet.

hahaha. nice song though. little corny but sweet.

[Reaver]

i really have nothing constructive to add, i was just laughing at "superdork". lol what a name

[doritoz]

lol, it a nice gift as it shows you really care, but I think the poem/lyrics/song is kind of corny.

[Bi11 Lumburgh]

This is kind of creepy but teenage girls eat this crap up, just not sure if they do coming from their brother

this, I can't imagine ever giving poems to siblings

however, I would still give it to her, because it may really connect with her and she will remember it for the rest of her like

[Waldorf]

that is honestly the creepiest and gayest thing i have ever read in my entire life

[ArtForLovers]

I think it's sweet. Go for it

[Formatfun]

"Let me in and take away your pain my dear
Have faith in my love"

Ehh. I don't know about these lines.

[tidalwave]

It's sweet, but honestly, if my sibling did this for me I'd be weirded out and be like 'wtf i wanted money'
Then again, I'm heartless, so maybe this will be the type of thing someone like her wants.
Good luck with it though. I hope she does like it!

[Waldorf]

"Let me in and take away your pain my dear
Have faith in my love"

Ehh. I don't know about these lines.

sounds like something boys like girls would have written in 2005

[Akissforher]

that is honestly the creepiest and gayest thing i have ever read in my entire life


umm thanks?

[Akissforher]

"Let me in and take away your pain my dear
Have faith in my love"

Ehh. I don't know about these lines.



haha well there is no denying of lame and corny half of this whole thing is.

[SofiaHxC]

I think it's sweet. Go for it

Me too.

[trevorshmevor]

that is honestly the creepiest and gayest thing i have ever read in my entire life

I really wanted to say something positive, I really really did. But all I can do is agree with this guy. I couldn't imagine giving this to someone, especially a relative. But hey, if that's just the way you and your sister are, then I say go for it... you obviously know her way better than any of us do. Sorry if this came off really dick-ish. Post the results in here after Christmas!

[LoginBanned]

that is honestly the creepiest and gayest thing i have ever read in my entire life

It's sweet, but honestly, if my sibling did this for me I'd be weirded out and be like 'wtf i wanted money'


These lines made me laugh out loud twice while I was on the phone at work.

[Akissforher]

I really wanted to say something positive, I really really did. But all I can do is agree with this guy. I couldn't imagine giving this to someone, especially a relative. But hey, if that's just the way you and your sister are, then I say go for it... you obviously know her way better than any of us do. Sorry if this came off really dick-ish. Post the results in here after Christmas!


well to give a brief run down its sort of a re-connection sort of thing, we've sort of gone apart for a long time now.
will do. fingers crossed.
and its okay i didnt think you were being dick-ish.

[Car Crash Dream]

Honestly, I hope it turns out for the best, but if I was a fifteen year old girl (which I'm not) and my twenty year old brother (who I don't have) gave me this as a christmas present, I would probably be like "Well, fuck. This is totally worthless." and I wouldn't recognize why you gave it to me, because I would be way too upset that some stupid ass kid broke up with me at 15. I would then proceed to grow apart from you, until I am about 30 years old, and I would find this in my box of old shit once I am married, with kids, and be like 'Holy fuck, greatest brother ever.' and call you up, but you would already be dead from a heroin addiction that stemmed from my rejection, causing me to fall deep into guilt, cheat on my husband, kill my children, and end up in prison where I would resort to blowing the guards for a couple of kit-kat bars every few weeks. Just saying.

[terror_91]

I'm still confused. Is this meant to be a present or are you trying to have sex with you sister?

[Akissforher]

Honestly, I hope it turns out for the best, but if I was a fifteen year old girl (which I'm not) and my twenty year old brother (who I don't have) gave me this as a christmas present, I would probably be like "Well, fuck. This is totally worthless." and I wouldn't recognize why you gave it to me, because I would be way too upset that some stupid ass kid broke up with me at 15. I would then proceed to grow apart from you, until I am about 30 years old, and I would find this in my box of old shit once I am married, with kids, and be like 'Holy fuck, greatest brother ever.' and call you up, but you would already be dead from a heroin addiction that stemmed from my rejection, causing me to fall deep into guilt, cheat on my husband, kill my children, and end up in prison where I would resort to blowing the guards for a couple of kit-kat bars every few weeks. Just saying.


haha holy fuck thats the best response yet. morbid but hilarious.

[Akissforher]

I'm still confused. Is this meant to be a present or are you trying to have sex with you sister?

just to clarify, no im not. lol

[Kozzy333]

Buy her a vibrator, tell her to take pics of her using it and post them in PL.

[PezMullet]

buy her some lube then giver her anal.

[arizonahotrock]

buy her some lube then giver her anal.

I can't believe it took 34 replies before someone mentioned anal...

And, dude above that post...with the vibrator comment...fucking el oh el.

[deFobbed14yrs]

^same i was waiting for anal......ummm that came out wrong....that did too.......

end note, that's a sweet sentiment, but maybe pair up the poem with like a material item like a nice purse or a cd or something

[terror_91]

^same i was waiting for anal....
You called?

[Ryzenfall]

Not sure how a brother/sister relationship works exactly so I'm not sure what to say, but if it's any help, I'm writing a poem to my brother for Christmas as a side gift too. He knows that I write often though, so it won't be that out of the ordinary.

[llwilliamsll]

What if you just put that in conversation form and just told her that you will always be there for her? That way, you don't need cheesy Hallmark type lines and there's less chance that she takes it the wrong way and thinks that you want to have sex with her.

By the way, is she hot?

[Akissforher]

What if you just put that in conversation form and just told her that you will always be there for her? That way, you don't need cheesy Hallmark type lines and there's less chance that she takes it the wrong way and thinks that you want to have sex with her.

By the way, is she hot?


Im getting a worrying amount of people thinking its about me trying to sleep with her. Fuck.
Well its early christmas morning here lets hope she doesnt misinterpret!

[Akissforher]

I really wanted to say something positive, I really really did. But all I can do is agree with this guy. I couldn't imagine giving this to someone, especially a relative. But hey, if that's just the way you and your sister are, then I say go for it... you obviously know her way better than any of us do. Sorry if this came off really dick-ish. Post the results in here after Christmas!

Ok i have post christas results and its a resounding EPIC FAIL. She is away visiting other family atm. So i didnt get a chance to speak to her til j ust now (Christmas night) and all i got was 'oh yeah it was nice but im over him anyway'

Fucking Christmas Fail.

[SofiaHxC]

Did it work?

[trevorshmevor]

Ok i have post christas results and its a resounding EPIC FAIL. She is away visiting other family atm. So i didnt get a chance to speak to her til j ust now (Christmas night) and all i got was 'oh yeah it was nice but im over him anyway'

Fucking Christmas Fail.

Well then. At least she doesn't hate you! Haha

[:-)]

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[Akissforher]

Did it work?

Ok i have post chrismtas results and its a resounding EPIC FAIL. She is away visiting other family atm. So i didnt get a chance to speak to her til j ust now (Christmas night) and all i got was 'oh yeah it was nice but im over him anyway'
Fail.

[SofiaHxC]

Poor brother LOL

[Akissforher]

Poor brother LOL
lol.