Communism Ruined My Wrist 2

[3ChinaPolicy2]

whats up, whats down, whats here or there,
what makes you read this, what makes you care,
about the words of a serious man,
who writes what he wants, who writes what he can

cos see its hard for me, to write out my words,
cos my hands were removed, and replaced with two turds,
man it hurt a lot, it hurt like shit
but not as much as a jizz assault . . shit

so im here again, POW, im back with a song
to make all you sing, to teach to your shlong,
so bounce to this, mother, bounce to it hard
cos the shizzle be popping, like a 12 year old tard

omg lol i almost forgot,
that i left my pizza cookin, inside a big pot
full of peanuts and hair, and GROSS UNDERWEAR
ahhhh tastes like acidic junk, should have added more skin

bro its two step pop (WOAH) so jump out the door

i see her standing there, so i rip off my nose
i throw it at her and she creams me
not in a good way
no
yes
no not again
communism ruined my wrist
see that guy there? he loves me. he's my father he has too
nah
yeah?
nah
ok time for a shower

[mulcahy67]

im not sure youre actually looking for criticism here.

but if you are, its pretty awful.

[a speedo model]

This is the first thing I've read in here in over 6 months, you made the return a horrible experience.

[3ChinaPolicy2]

your mum was a horrible experience BOOM

[KatastrophiE]

loved it

[GhostMachine]

You're really one of superb individuals who's head is probably shoved so far up your own ass that you can't see the shit you're putting out. Besides the fact that you're grammar needs an incredible amount of work, the whole idea of the piece is merely fragmented thoughts strewn together in an attempt at being something you're obviously failing at....

That's me being nice....you should give up writing and just disappear beneath a rock.

[lfdfforever]

This is the first thing I've read in here in over 6 months, you made the return a horrible experience.hey dude! I've got lyrics posted.

[bastard_of_ness]

whats up, whats down, whats here or there,
what makes you read this, what makes you care,
about the words of a serious man,
who writes what he wants, who writes what he can

cos see its hard for me, to write out my words,
cos my hands were removed, and replaced with two turds,
man it hurt a lot, it hurt like shit
but not as much as a jizz assault . . shit

so im here again, POW, im back with a song
to make all you sing, to teach to your shlong,
so bounce to this, mother, bounce to it hard
cos the shizzle be popping, like a 12 year old tard

omg lol i almost forgot,
that i left my pizza cookin, inside a big pot
full of peanuts and hair, and GROSS UNDERWEAR
ahhhh tastes like acidic junk, should have added more skin

bro its two step pop (WOAH) so jump out the door

i see her standing there, so i rip off my nose
i throw it at her and she creams me
not in a good way
no
yes
no not again
communism ruined my wrist
see that guy there? he loves me. he's my father he has too
nah
yeah?
nah
ok time for a shower

Are you SERIOUSLY 26 years old?