Ramblings from a Self-Loathing Egotist

[drpepper09]

something I've pieced together over the past few months. In the song format,
there is supposed to be good portions of instrumentation between each verse and none of it is repeated.

Critique is extremely appreciated. If you critique mine and post your song/poem link ill help you to the best of my abilities.



Ramblings from a Self-Loathing Egotist

Does a falling tree in the woods make a sound
If there is no one left to hear it?
Does a collapsing ego left alone hurt a soul
If there’s no one left to feed it?

Who am I to give advice
When every night
Turns out to be the same?
Another night alone in the dark
As millions of others simply
Release the tension
Thus creating the sparks
That continue to make
The world spin around
Until it speeds to a halt
And I try and try,
Harder and harder,
To put these devils at bay
That just don’t seem
To go away
And I try to keep
My mind at ease
Yet I just can’t
Please to be.
At ease

You pray that your savior is coming,
Well you shouldn’t be so loud.
Now you sold your soul to the devil
You better burn in hell
You better burn in hell
You better
You better
Yeah you better burn in hell.