Elosia can you hear me? Abelard is Silent

[Slaytus]

Love is veiled
Cover, your eyes darling
Deceitful?
We Are Just Caged Rabbits
Fuck Faster!
Repeat After Me. We'll Love Like Fashions
Wear them like a dress you use once and never again
Love grows and Lust decays away with distance
"It's all falling apart. I'm erasing you and I'm happy!"
Feeling pain, to suffer: anquish
Let Lies Flow... "I love you my prince"
Build up the defenses! Our hearts are compassionate
the process of loss has taught us what we began with

[Slaytus]

comments.suggestions.kill it if u hate. and love it if u...love it :)

[matt_rawlings]

Its not bad in a litererery sense, it just isn't that original. The whole thing has been done to death and it has been done considerably better. Keep trying though